help with an Ode Poem..

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    03-16-2010, 08:35 PM
Green Broke
help with an Ode Poem..

I have to write an Ode poem and I chose horses. I am TERRIBLE at poetry. And this thing is due tomorrow I at least need a start on how to get this done. It has to be 5 stanza's and 4 lines per stanza and has to have at least one line of personification and some form of rhyme scheme. If you guys can give me a start that would be awesome. Or if you want give me the whole thing but it's due tomorrow! Of course i'd prefer the whole thing but just like 2-4 lines works on getting me started.
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    03-16-2010, 09:12 PM
Green Broke
Woo nevermind I got it! Incase you guys wanted to see it lol here it is.

Ode to my horse

I love you, my dear sweet horse,
You however you should know this already of course.
Even though you make me trek around trying to find you for an hour.
When I climb aboard you back and ride I feel full of power.
I spend over 300$'s on a vet,
Even though you are only a pet.
Yet you give me the wings I lack
And I really want to thank you for that.
You have to have new shoes every 6 weeks
But when I forget, i'll make it up to you with lots of treats
I get up everyday to feed you grain,
In the hail, sleet, snow, or rain.
Even when you think it's fun to try to buck me off
I still find it in my heart to fill your feed trough!
People call me crazy for still getting back on
But I know if I don't you'll think you've won
However when I look into your kind eyes
I know i've already got the best prize
My horse I really do love you
And this you know is true
    03-17-2010, 02:26 PM
Nice! *claps*
    03-30-2010, 03:23 AM
Very nice!

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