Hi, I'm new, and I have a story to share! - Page 2
 
 

       The Horse Forum > Horse Pictures, Videos, Artwork, and Contests > Horse Stories and Poems

Hi, I'm new, and I have a story to share!

This is a discussion on Hi, I'm new, and I have a story to share! within the Horse Stories and Poems forums, part of the Horse Pictures, Videos, Artwork, and Contests category

     
    LinkBack Thread Tools
        04-22-2009, 10:27 PM
      #11
    Foal
    Haha! I love it! It's really good and I love how you show the main characters personality like right from the start. I think you should fit in a description of how the girl looks, but beside that it's great! I want to hear the rest! I'm writing a story, too.
         
    Sponsored Links
    Advertisement
     
        04-23-2009, 07:24 PM
      #12
    Foal
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by sunny7horse    
    Haha! I love it! It's really good and I love how you show the main characters personality like right from the start. I think you should fit in a description of how the girl looks, but beside that it's great! I want to hear the rest! I'm writing a story, too.
    Glad you like it! I'll work on it some more. I'd love to hear your story. PM me some!
         
        04-24-2009, 09:52 AM
      #13
    Foal
    The taxi ride went by very quickly, and I found out a few things about Chris. First, His main goal by coming to the school is that he will be accepted into a great riding college, and hopefully rise to the American Olympic Riding Team. Second, He boards his own horse here, a black Warmblood Jumper Cross. Third and lastly, He doesn't have a girlfriend. I also learned one thing about myself: I was determined to fill that place. Of girlfriend, I mean. Anyways, when we got to the academy, Chris hopped out and opened the door for me. I climbed out, and made a remark about chivalry not being dead. So dorky. But he seemed to think it was funny, and laughed a little. I hefted my bags out from the back. Chris came over and grabbed two bags off of my huge stack. "Gotta keep up that good reputation." He said with a grin that threatened to melt my heart. I smiled back. Then I finally looked at the building of the school. It was tall and brick, with a metal polished sign that read, "The John Whitaker Riding Acadamy." I stared up at it, intimadated by the school's size. Chris nuged my shoulder. "C'mon," he said, and strode up the stairs. I followed, still cautious.
         
        04-24-2009, 12:31 PM
      #14
    Weanling
    Keep it up!!!!
         
        04-26-2009, 08:19 PM
      #15
    Foal
    I would love to hear more!
         
        04-28-2009, 07:29 PM
      #16
    Weanling
    Oh this is soo good more more MORE!!!!!
         
        04-29-2009, 05:40 PM
      #17
    Foal
    Thanks guys. I've gotta writer's block right now though, so I'm going to work on it when I can think clearly, LOL.
         
        04-29-2009, 06:21 PM
      #18
    Foal
    WAIT! Here's more....


    Okay. The school is so terrifyingly huge. Not to mention I've never been on a horse before in my life and now I'm supposed to be an amazing and talented show jumper?? WHAT THE HECK IS UP WITH THAT?!! Chris took me up to the school administrator then left, saying he would see me at dinner. The lady, Mrs. Matthews, was all, I just know you'll be a tremendous asset to the riding team. HA HA HA. Mrs. Matthews stuck me with some girl who after showing me to my room and helping me dump my suitcases in there, is now showing me around. Now we're walking around the school. She has platinum blond hair (dyed for sure), and an overall Prima Donna appearance. Gag. I think her name is Stephanie. She says to call her, "Steph." Double gag. Stephanie turned to me. "And over there is the dining hall," she says, pointing right past my shoulder.
         
        04-30-2009, 05:59 PM
      #19
    Foal
    I'm not sure that I like the way the story is going. Does the girl need to get a better additude?
         
        04-30-2009, 08:40 PM
      #20
    Weanling
    make her be a goody to goody girl lol
         

    Quick Reply
    Please help keep the Horse Forum enjoyable by reporting rude posts.
    Message:
    Options

    Register Now

    In order to be able to post messages on the The Horse Forum forums, you must first register.

    Already have a Horse Forum account?
    Members are allowed only one account per person at the Horse Forum, so if you've made an account here in the past you'll need to continue using that account. Please do not create a new account or you may lose access to the Horse Forum. If you need help recovering your existing account, please Contact Us. We'll be glad to help!

    New to the Horse Forum?
    Please choose a username you will be satisfied with using for the duration of your membership at the Horse Forum. We do not change members' usernames upon request because that would make it difficult for everyone to keep track of who is who on the forum. For that reason, please do not incorporate your horse's name into your username so that you are not stuck with a username related to a horse you may no longer have some day, or use any other username you may no longer identify with or care for in the future.

    User Name:
    Password
    Please enter a password for your user account. Note that passwords are case-sensitive.
    Password:
    Confirm Password:
    Email Address
    Please enter a valid email address for yourself.
    Email Address:

    Log-in

    Human Verification

    In order to verify that you are a human and not a spam bot, please enter the answer into the following box below based on the instructions contained in the graphic.


    Old Thread Warning
    This thread is more than 90 days old. When a thread is this old, it is often better to start a new thread rather than post to it. However, If you feel you have something of value to add to this particular thread, you can do so by checking the box below before submitting your post.

    Thread Tools

    Similar Threads
    Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
    Would you share your story? MIcowgirl Horse Stories and Poems 0 09-22-2008 11:13 AM
    To Share again My2Geldings Horse Videos 3 05-30-2008 05:56 PM
    just had to share =] saraequestrian Horse Training 5 05-16-2008 11:31 AM
    Just had to share. :) meggymoo Horse Talk 3 02-01-2008 06:24 AM
    I'm New so I thought that I would share Savara Horse Pictures 10 05-25-2007 04:02 AM



    All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:50 PM.


    Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
    Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
    Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.6.0