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Hi, I'm new, and I have a story to share!

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        04-30-2009, 08:33 PM
      #21
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    I like it a lot. Not sure about the last bit, has the tense changed from the beginning? I think you switched from past to present.

    BUT you definitely have talent, keep it up! Can't wait to find out what happens with Clara and Chris, ha ha ha. :]
         
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        05-12-2009, 09:43 PM
      #22
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    Come on now!!!! Keeep it comeing
    !!!!!!!
         

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