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Horse Story(Hoping to get it published when done) Feedback?

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        02-14-2008, 09:44 AM
    We want more! We want more!! We want more!!!!
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        02-23-2008, 03:53 PM
    I can't wait for more!!!!!
    I read all of it.
    Great ideas.
    I love it!!!!
    Please tell me when there is more.
        03-10-2008, 10:21 PM
    More? Please?
        05-06-2008, 11:56 AM
    Okay, I want to read the rest! I would try to get more adjectives in there - describe a bit more. But, If you get too crazy with describing things, it can get boring. I like the happy medium, so you can make your own idea of what things look like. I also like to write, and I think you are doing great.

    If you think it's going along too fast, then that's your personal preference. I kinda need a bit more action - maybe a storm, a cop's visit to the barn, and narrow escapes. That's good, heart-pounding suspence!
        05-09-2008, 09:49 PM
    Moreeeeee pleaseeee. :) I really like it.
        07-04-2008, 11:29 PM
    Its really good I have just 1 come its forbidden to talk about horses? I don't understand....

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