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post #11 of 16 Old 02-14-2008, 09:44 AM
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We want more! We want more!! We want more!!!!
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post #12 of 16 Old 02-23-2008, 03:53 PM
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i can't wait for more!!!!!
i read all of it.
great ideas.
i love it!!!!
please tell me when there is more.
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post #13 of 16 Old 03-10-2008, 10:21 PM
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more? please?
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post #14 of 16 Old 05-06-2008, 11:56 AM
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Okay, I want to read the rest! I would try to get more adjectives in there - describe a bit more. But, If you get too crazy with describing things, it can get boring. I like the happy medium, so you can make your own idea of what things look like. I also like to write, and I think you are doing great.

If you think it's going along too fast, then that's your personal preference. I kinda need a bit more action - maybe a storm, a cop's visit to the barn, and narrow escapes. That's good, heart-pounding suspence!

"Have You given the horse strength? Have You clothed his neck in thunder? Can you frighten him like a locust?
His majestic snorting strikes terror.He paws in the valley, and rejoices in his strength; Job 39:19...
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post #15 of 16 Old 05-09-2008, 09:49 PM
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Moreeeeee pleaseeee. :) I really like it.

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post #16 of 16 Old 07-04-2008, 11:29 PM
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its really good i have just 1 come its forbidden to talk about horses? i don't understand....

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