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post #1 of 3 Old 03-02-2008, 08:07 PM Thread Starter
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Just a little poem......

I had to write a "nature" poem for English I figured I might as well put it on the Forum. It's not great at all and I wrote it in like 5 minutes (don't tell my English teacher)..... so don't make fun!

Here it goes:

A power plant on four legs
with enough energy to outlast
the Energizer bunny.

Hyper and high-strung
strung very tight, tighter than
a rubber band near breaking.

Warm-blooded and hotheaded
he thinks he is wild and free even
with me on his back.

He runs swiftly in a bolt of energy
not by command or pleasure, but by
fear from an unknown source.

That magnificent Arabian
majestic and spirited is
a thrilling rollercoaster ride.
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post #2 of 3 Old 03-03-2008, 01:26 PM
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Loved it! The only thing is everything else is so serious in your poem so the reference to the "energizer bunny" didn't seem to fit. JMO!!! Otherwise I could visualize everything you were trying to say and I think it was AMAZING!
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post #3 of 3 Old 03-03-2008, 09:02 PM Thread Starter
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Originally Posted by ahearn
Loved it! The only thing is everything else is so serious in your poem so the reference to the "energizer bunny" didn't seem to fit. JMO!!! Otherwise I could visualize everything you were trying to say and I think it was AMAZING!
haha, I knew it didn't fit...... but I was lazy and car sick so I gave up trying to find a better analogy.......
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