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Me&Red---a poem

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        07-14-2007, 07:29 PM
      #1
    Foal
    Me&Red---a poem

    What a a wonderful
    Day to ride
    The sunlight shining on my face

    Red speeds up to
    The beat and the way
    He's telling me he wants to go

    So I say, "Red, you do what you want here,
    You run the way
    You tell yourself..."

    He canters and neighs
    Happily and i
    Just love him
    Because he knows he's mine to be
    He knows that he'll always be free

    We step up the speed
    Knowing that just beyond the hill
    Something we never dreamed of awaits

    The feel of the saddle
    The roar of the wind
    Around my ears, escaping from fears

    His pace quickening
    Edge him on faster
    "Red, you run, you run so fast..."

    Jumps edge closer
    Can almost feel them...
    Red gallops to his own beat
    gallops fast on his four feet
         
        07-15-2007, 02:09 AM
      #2
    Foal
    Thats really good!! I can really feel the connection between you and your horse!! The mood and atmosphere totally mix with each other giving you a fantastic poem!!
         
        08-11-2007, 01:07 PM
      #3
    Foal
    Wow you have a beautiful horse! I love your poem it was very nicely written and your emotions were expressed well.
         

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