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post #1 of 7 Old 11-28-2008, 11:10 PM Thread Starter
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Mustang Poem I wrote

Here's a poem I jotted down one day..... what do you think?
"The Mustang"

So many horse,* the wild and free,
*Like birds, flying o'er the grassy sea,
So many horse, none to ride,
Rearing, galloping side by side.
Feet on never a shoe was lain,
Great mouths never marred by pain,
Backs that have* never been scarred by whip,
No harsh cold bit behind the lip.
So many horse the wild and free,
Like birds, flying o'er the grassy sea,
Shall live and die and die and live,
Never taking, never give;
Always there, and always free,
Go thickly galloping on.

"Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass, but about learning to dance in the rain"
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post #2 of 7 Old 11-28-2008, 11:16 PM
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awwww I like that! thanks for sharing
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post #3 of 7 Old 12-03-2008, 02:38 PM
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Dude!!! Thats so rad. I like it a lot.
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post #4 of 7 Old 12-04-2008, 01:56 PM
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Very nice!

You should 'just jot' more down, you have talent!

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post #5 of 7 Old 12-06-2008, 12:20 PM
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Very good, I like it!

Ride more, worry less.
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post #6 of 7 Old 12-10-2008, 03:09 PM
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Very good
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post #7 of 7 Old 12-12-2008, 09:19 PM
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Very good and that is how it feels to ride a mustang too. Like flying over the land with freedom you've never felt before. :)

Always remember that feeling of looking at a big, open country over the ears of a good horse, seeing a new trail unwind ahead of you, and that ever-spectacular view from the top of the ridge!!! Follow my training blog:
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