Mustang Poem I wrote

Here's a poem I jotted down one day..... what do you think?
"The Mustang"

So many horse,* the wild and free,
*Like birds, flying o'er the grassy sea,
So many horse, none to ride,
Rearing, galloping side by side.
Feet on never a shoe was lain,
Great mouths never marred by pain,
Backs that have* never been scarred by whip,
No harsh cold bit behind the lip.
So many horse the wild and free,
Like birds, flying o'er the grassy sea,
Shall live and die and die and live,
Never taking, never give;
Always there, and always free,
Go thickly galloping on.

Awwww I like that! Thanks for sharing

Dude!!! That's so rad. I like it a lot.

Very nice!

You should 'just jot' more down, you have talent!

Very good, I like it!

Very good
Phil

Very good and that is how it feels to ride a mustang too. Like flying over the land with freedom you've never felt before. :)