Yes it's very interesting - but you get a taste of that on this forum, I guess, when you post your snippets of stories. I like where this one's going, btw!
One of the reader reviews I got on Amazon
said she thought the relationship got 'too explicit', but then she still gave it 4 stars (out of 5). One reader thought the main character 'sounded' too old for 17; another thought she was naive for 17. I think it depends on the reader more than the story!