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        06-14-2013, 05:21 PM
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    Foal
    nightmare

    Chapter 1

    Sophie pulled the saddle onto willows back her little spirited Thoroughbred. Just that moment a shiny ford came up the road and out stepped out. Amy rover who had long blonde hair and wore shiny black jodhpurs and a nice pink top with diamonds on it the next one to step out was Samantha Davis..
    should I continue
         
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        06-14-2013, 07:16 PM
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    Yearling
    Sure, why not? Go for it!
         
        06-14-2013, 07:53 PM
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    Foal
    ?? Your first sentence doesn't make sense???
         
        06-14-2013, 08:58 PM
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    Foal
    Yeah never duble checked it ChristineNJ and ill add more tomorrow.
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        07-06-2013, 01:35 PM
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    Weanling
    Remember to put periods in appropriate places. You really should double check, I had to reread it several times to understand it. Sorry if I'm a little blunt, just trying to be helpful. Remember to also capitalize titles and names. Willow, Rover and Nightmare all need to be capitalized:)
         

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