Okay!!! Thanks again guys!!! Yayy!!!
It wasn't long before Andria could here the lazy yet authoritative click of Amberly's cowgirl boots coming down the isle, two more sets trailing behind her. Andria, still working, picked up part of Amberly's conversation. "...Today was a good day to come out. Most of my students and boarders are at a popular show a few hours north, and I don't have anything lined up. Thank you for coming out," Amberly said, her voice getting louder as she neared. The new girl's mother replied. "Thank you for having us. Savannah's excited to bring her horse here." Andria cocked an eyebrow to herself. A new boarder, huh? Scooping up the last pile of manure, Andria dumped it into the wheel barrow. She set the manure rake - affectionately known as the pooper scooper by many - on the ouside of the stall and pushed the filled barrow out into the isle. Steering it out of the barn, a tired Andria made her way to the compost pile behind the barn and dumped the wheelbarrow out. Wheeling it around, she pushed the now empty barrow down the side of the long red barn, coming around to the front and parking it by the last empty hitching post. Amberly was still busy with the new folks, but they were already situated in their car, with Amberly chatting gracefully with the mom through a rolled down window. Wiping her grimy hands on her jeans for what felt like the millionth time, Andria strolled across the level gravel ground of the yard and walked into the barn, in search of some extra carrots.
While she was rustling through her various bags in the tack room, Amberly stepped up and grabbed a lounge whip. "That was interesting," Amberly stated thoughtfully, untangling a knot in the whip. Andria tilted her head, finally grasping a sticky candy cane. "Yeah? What was the girl like?" She replied, closing the box she found the candy cane in. Amberly turned around, glancing at Andria with pursed, pale pink lips. "Quiet. Very quiet. But I like her." Amberly paused, before gesturing for Andria to follow her and walking out the door. After Andria performed a double-take - Amberly *never* gave out compliments as easy as that - she ran to catch up with her instructor. "She's coming here with her mare in two weeks. Help me with the new guys?" Amberly asked, smiling at Andria. Andria nodded eagerly. "Yep!!! I mean Yes!!! Yes please!!!" Andria shrilled, a happy grin curled up on her lips. Today was a good day. It always was whenever Andria went to the barn, but today was just unusually good. She practically had the barn to herself, but meeting The Gelding really made Andria's day. Amberly gestured to the chestnut. "Can you put him in the round pen while I get hotshot jones over here unloaded??"
Again, critique critique critique!!!! I really want to improve as much as possible, so I want what you all think. Still jumping around to much? Bad grammar?? Going to slow???