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    01-13-2011, 04:28 PM
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Fly
Foal
Poem; Mended

I'm horrified to do this, horrified. Its a long story that explains the poem so I wont post it unless asked.
M E N D E D
We bought you for love,
But we never knew of,
Gods plan for you,
That tore us apart,
But we came together at the end,
And were able to mend,
That tear(tare, sp?),
But now your leaving,
I’ll still keep believing,
That we were meant to be,
Mended back into you and me.
I LOVE YOU STAR
Edited, : where/were. CRITIQUE PLZ
     
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    01-19-2011, 03:45 PM
  #2
Fly
Foal
Anyone? Please critique!
     
    02-01-2011, 11:42 AM
  #3
Foal
Nice poem. (:
     

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