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        08-11-2009, 01:04 AM
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    Weanling
    poem

    Its a working progress please tell me what you think or if I should change anything.

    I was so quiet
    Nothing like a riot.
    Looking down
    With a frown.
    When I finally looked up
    I was oh so hooked.
    Your smile made me feel
    Like nothing was a big deal.
    Everything just seemed to disappear
    Outside the distant atmosphere .
    You gave me what I needed
    Everything else just receded.
    When you said goodbye
    I thought I could die.
    But the memories you gave me
    Told me they could save me.
         
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        10-07-2010, 08:38 PM
      #2
    Foal
    Well writen
         

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