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    05-13-2011, 12:35 AM
I didn't realise how good it was :)

I think my favourite one I ever wrote is called 'dressage' have a look at it and tell me what you think
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    05-14-2011, 06:38 AM
Yay! I will read it now
    05-29-2011, 08:45 AM
Sorry it has taken so long for the next bit, and theres not much... but im writing more tomorrow :)

She whickered happily and nosed my bucket as if she knew she was getting a wash and was exited.
I gently sponged her and with every sponge came a new, lighter shade of grey.
When her now almost white coat was damp I put some of the apple smelling shampoo on my hands and massaged it through.
Her lower lip went soft when I rubbed the shampoo just under her neck… she liked it!
After a rinse I rubbed the coconut conditioner over my wet hands and there was now a rich smell of mixed coconut and apple in the air.
Rinsing off for the last time her mane and coat sparkled like a midsummer morning.
“Good girl Poppy,” I praised her while admiring my handy work.
I rubbed her down with an old cloth and planting a kiss on her cheek and closing the gate behind me, I skipped into the house overjoyed to be a pony owner;
    05-30-2011, 02:47 AM
This story is so cute, keep going Marlea.
    05-30-2011, 06:09 PM
I would love to see a picture of Poppy! She sounds like a lovely little mare. Your writing is very good, too Keep up the good work!
    05-30-2011, 09:12 PM
I think I have a photo of her somewhere in my room...
    05-30-2011, 10:21 PM
Please do share
    05-31-2011, 08:54 PM
Wow you are a really good writer, especially for your age! Keep going, I'm enjoying reading this.
    06-03-2011, 10:13 PM
Wanna share some more ??
    06-03-2011, 10:30 PM
I will as soon as i've figured out whats happening next :)

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