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        05-12-2011, 11:35 PM
      #21
    Started
    I didn't realise how good it was :)

    I think my favourite one I ever wrote is called 'dressage' have a look at it and tell me what you think
         
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        05-14-2011, 05:38 AM
      #22
    Trained
    Yay! I will read it now
         
        05-29-2011, 07:45 AM
      #23
    Started
    Sorry it has taken so long for the next bit, and theres not much... but im writing more tomorrow :)




    She whickered happily and nosed my bucket as if she knew she was getting a wash and was exited.
    I gently sponged her and with every sponge came a new, lighter shade of grey.
    When her now almost white coat was damp I put some of the apple smelling shampoo on my hands and massaged it through.
    Her lower lip went soft when I rubbed the shampoo just under her neck… she liked it!
    After a rinse I rubbed the coconut conditioner over my wet hands and there was now a rich smell of mixed coconut and apple in the air.
    Rinsing off for the last time her mane and coat sparkled like a midsummer morning.
    “Good girl Poppy,” I praised her while admiring my handy work.
    I rubbed her down with an old cloth and planting a kiss on her cheek and closing the gate behind me, I skipped into the house overjoyed to be a pony owner;
         
        05-30-2011, 01:47 AM
      #24
    Banned
    This story is so cute, keep going Marlea.
         
        05-30-2011, 05:09 PM
      #25
    Yearling
    I would love to see a picture of Poppy! She sounds like a lovely little mare. Your writing is very good, too Keep up the good work!
         
        05-30-2011, 08:12 PM
      #26
    Started
    I think I have a photo of her somewhere in my room...
         
        05-30-2011, 09:21 PM
      #27
    Yearling
    Please do share
         
        05-31-2011, 07:54 PM
      #28
    Foal
    Wow you are a really good writer, especially for your age! Keep going, I'm enjoying reading this.
         
        06-03-2011, 09:13 PM
      #29
    Trained
    Wanna share some more ??
         
        06-03-2011, 09:30 PM
      #30
    Started
    I will as soon as i've figured out whats happening next :)
         

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