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post #31 of 41 Old 06-09-2011, 09:39 PM
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Don't leave me waiting!!

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post #32 of 41 Old 06-14-2011, 08:18 PM
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marlea.... thats amazing..... omg thats a good story ... u should publish it when you finish it .... keep it coming
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post #33 of 41 Old 06-14-2011, 11:41 PM Thread Starter
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so angry right now!! (my computers getting fixed so cant keep writing!)

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post #34 of 41 Old 06-15-2011, 09:37 PM
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I think this story is better then some of the books I have read. :S
Keep writing it when you're ready, I can't wait to hear the end of it! :)

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post #35 of 41 Old 06-23-2011, 10:34 AM Thread Starter
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sorry for the suspension guys haha.
Sorry it's not much but it'll have to do :)

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“Beep, Beep, Beep!!” My alarm clock went off, disturbing my dream of winning the Barastoc. As I looked sleepily at the time I cocked my head wondering why I set it for 6:00 in the morning when it was the weekend. I pressed snooze hoping I would be able to drift back to sleep so I could finish of my wow factor routine, win the gold medal and be on magazine covers with head lines saying Sarah! The best Barastoc rider in the world! And I would say that it was all because of Poppy.
Then a thought struck me… Poppy, that’s why I woke up this early; I had a pony that needed me.
I was suddenly now wide awake and I ripped the covers off my bed, this time the cat realised what was coming and jumped off before she took to the air like a test pilot.
I trotted down the stairs and into the kitchen where dad was sipping at a coffee.
“Morning dad!” I chirped giving him a quick kiss on the cheek.
“Good morning, are you going out to your horse?”
“Poppy... And yes I am,”

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post #36 of 41 Old 06-23-2011, 10:56 AM
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I like it! Keep it coming! I'm also soon to publish a picture book! You use very descriptive words and it's like nothing I've ever seen before!

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post #37 of 41 Old 06-23-2011, 11:17 AM Thread Starter
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lildonkey... write a thread about your picture book! i'd love to hear about it!!


and thankyou... mum was an actress and told me that it sounds the most real when you add details that aren't nesesary...

e.g. theres a game called two rights and a wrong and you have to guess what the wrong is... she said she was miss universe, she had a part fake right knee cap and she was 36 y.o.... now most of you would think the false was miss universe but infact the false was she has a part fake right knee cap (smart huh?)
So that's kind of like what i did "Now i would have a real pony to use my brushes on and not just my stuffed one with the missing eye"

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p.s. when you say it's like nothing you've seen before... that's a good thing right!!?? lol

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post #38 of 41 Old 06-23-2011, 09:25 PM
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I haven't finished it yet but I'll post it when I'm done

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post #39 of 41 Old 06-23-2011, 11:12 PM Thread Starter
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ok cool!!

i have another story (prob not getting published) that i wrote a thread about... take a look and see what you think... it's called indian ponies and i wrote it in grade 4 (im in year 8 now!)

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post #40 of 41 Old 06-23-2011, 11:28 PM
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I just finished fourth grade! I think that would be fifth year

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