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    11-11-2009, 12:54 AM
  #1
Yearling
Roughdraft Poem #1

Just a roughdraft of a poem, this was my first shot at it, eventually I will end up changing some of the words or improving it in SOME way lol.

So first off.... this is a poem that I am dedicating my horse indigo, you may realize I post alot about him because I absoultely adore him and he is my own horse, while the rest of them are my dads, except twister( who is still probably coming) she will be mine, but for now Indigo is my own personal horse that I bought for myself.
But I think these words on this roughdraft really say it all, they arent the words I had in my head, I think alot and have poems going through my head but when it comes down to writing it on paper well I never get the same poem I was saying over and over again in my head lol !

So without further adue, Poem Draft #1.

Helpless, Scared and thinned to the bone,
Unknowing of your fate, you searched my soul and found me,
A reflecting mirrow, so unaware, rather unprepared
You found me, you found me,
So alike, but still so different,
Your scars shone through
While My scars were barely noticed.
You saw me, and you needed me as much as I needed you,
Our fates a completely different path, Twisted into one.

And if love is blind, than I am blinded by your love


( lol please don't be harsh, I take things pretty serious and to heart, and I havent wrotten a poem in agess literally and I never really post my work online lol )
     
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    11-20-2009, 04:42 PM
  #2
Foal
Cool how did you think if it? Sadly I do not know how to write poetry.
     
    11-20-2009, 06:58 PM
  #3
Yearling
Lol I honestly don't know, Sometimes thing's just kind of come to me :)

But regardless I am still learning new things everyday :)
     
    10-07-2010, 06:34 PM
  #4
Foal
That was excellent
     

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