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    06-21-2012, 08:57 PM
Green Broke
Share your poems/stories!

Just created this for everyone to share poems and stories on here, I have one so I will add it as well. Hope y'all enjoy :)
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    06-21-2012, 09:17 PM
Green Broke
Aaaaw man! Of course I saw this while I was on my other computer! Grrrr
    06-26-2012, 08:03 PM
Green Broke
Haha whats wrong with that?
    07-01-2012, 08:30 PM
That is really beautiful.

Did you write it?
    07-06-2012, 04:45 PM

This copyright is for the pic, I wrote the poem.
Copyright: Richard Cooper Knight (cooper-knights) (36)
    07-16-2012, 04:03 PM
Here's a story I am currently writting (Just the beginning)

Shadow and I turned towards the triple combination. There were only six jumps left after we took this. Shadow was going in a little fast so I half haulted her until she responded, her stride shortened, and slowed but she was still going confident. Right now we were fighting for at least fifth place in the Junior Eventing Trials at the Mount Cape Springs Classic, the last major show of the season. We were in the last phase, Show Jumping, and so far we had been doing great, not a rail down in sight. My coach Ashley had made the twenty four hour trip with me. My parents had to stay back due to expenses.
We thundered across the muddy ground, towards the first oxer made of green and yellow poles, Shadow soared over it then took one tentative stride towards the double. At the last moment she decided not to jump it. Then she changed her mind and launched herself over it, throwing my seat out of balance. As quickly as it all happened the cold, hard, wet ground came faster. We both plummeted towards the frosty fall ground We landed, but I felt Shadow rotating through the air. I looked up and watched as her hindquarters flew towards my helpless self.
A sickening crunch sounded through my entire body. Blood poured from my mouth, the mud and water clung to my clothes. I was moving very fast across the wet ground and then all of a sudden with a jerk of my leg it all came to a stop. I lay flat on my back looking into the grey clouded sky, lying right in midst of a puddle. Cold rain fell chilling me right to the bone. I shivered uncontrollably. My whole body hurt so bad I couldn't think, I had no clue how bad it really was.
Screams and shouts aroused me from my blackness. I wished for the blackness back for it brought tranquility and peace. It was a pain free world. The one that at the same time scared me so badly. Ashley is standing over me, she has her warm hand on my shoulder. Her thick, warm, plaid barn jacket placed over my convulsing body. I ignored all pleads for me to stay awake and let my eyes do the thinking as I drifted away into the darkness of the unknown.
Two people leaned over my broken body. A man and a woman, I could see the woman's mouth moving but all I could hear was the blood rushing in my ears, and the steady pound of my heart. Something cold was strapped around my neck holding straight up. The man grabbed my ankles, while the woman, wearing a highlighter yellow coat grabbed my shoulders. The lifted me over onto a cold hard surface. Pain screamed from under me, from what I assumed was coming from my lower spine. I was suddenly lifted into the air, floating through it with no trouble at all. A hissing mask was put over my nose, causing my breathing to level out. Someone was stroking my hair form beside me. My hand wrapped in someones warm grasp. I wanted to close my eyes and disapeer, the lady sitting beside me shone a light in both my eyes, prying each one open, like I couldn't feel a thing. I tried to raise my hand to stop her, but when I tried nothing happened.
In a state of hysteria I started to cry, unable to help myself I started thrashing around, ignoring the stabbing feeling that pulsated through my back. I tried to reach for the mask on my mouth, when my hand made contact I ripped it off gasping for air. I waved my arms around in a state of panic, not knowing what the world was throwing at me. There were two sets of arms holding me down, they were both to strong for me to even budge them. I felt a prick in my arm, after about ten seconds, I felt calm, like no one was doing any harm to me. I just stared blankly up at the ceiling, drifting away into nowhere. My eyes fluttered shut, all sound washed away from my ears, all I could sense was being pulled away from consciousness, slowly, I closed my eyes, ending the terror rising in my stomach. At peace I fell into a dangerous sleep, where I remained for quite some time.
    09-19-2012, 06:14 PM
Green Broke
Sorry everyone, I didn't recieve any notification of new messages on here for some reason...
Wow Shadow Puppet, that is really really good!!!
And Wild old thing, thank you, and yes I did write it :)
    11-02-2012, 01:02 AM
Green Broke
Originally Posted by skyhorse1999    

This copyright is for the pic, I wrote the poem.
Copyright: Richard Cooper Knight (cooper-knights) (36)
just noticed your picture didn't show sorry :/
    11-02-2012, 12:12 PM
Haha thatas ok......I had it in my pics then did a bug sweep up and got it deleted::)
    11-02-2012, 05:26 PM
Green Broke
Originally Posted by skyhorse1999    
haha thatas ok......I had it in my pics then did a bug sweep up and got it deleted::)
Ah lol ok xD

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