Join Date: Feb 2012
Location: The Bluegrass State
I love the plot. Really, really love it. Just try to make sure you aren't being too blunt with everything. Make us think!! We want to make our own opinions of who these people are, what they are like, the world around them, etc. If you are feeding us every little aspect as point blank as possible, it sucks out a bit of the creativity and fun of reading. Details are wanted, yes, but let the details explain the bottom line.
I hope you can catch what I'm saying, it may be a bit difficult to comprehend to those who don't write.
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