Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: in a barn, on my horse;]
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Something I wrote for english a while back
I wrote this poem for english class a while back and figured I'd share it with ya'll.
I galloped freely, going where I please,
Until humans captured me, so they could travel with ease,
I looked longingly, at the open pastures abroad,
wishing I could once again graze all day long,
As my rider mounts, sticking his vicious metal into my stomach,
I throw out a few bucks, wishing this rider the best of luck.
The open pastures are my goal, if only I could lose this fool.
Foals play in the fields and are curious about my pursuit.
A fence is the one thing, keeping me from all that green!
I jump it freely, soaring, and landing once again,
My destination reached, I begin to graze.
I hear my rider speaking of all my grace!
Critique, tell me what you think!!
Equestrianism- the obsessive pursuit of perfection by the inevitably imperfect.