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    08-08-2009, 12:16 AM
  #1
Foal
A song for my horse

This song doesn't rhyme at all, but this type of song doesn't have to. I was inspired by a song by my favorite band, but I wrote this for my horse, Taka-kun, who is traumatized because of a poor choice made by a stupid young rider.


I had always dreamt of a future that would last forever
All these years it didn't fade
And I've finally found you, my love
But now I'm watching it all being crushed under the weight of time

You trusted me and only me
Enough that I could sleep by your side at night
I promised you that you wouldn't be hurt anymore
That you could learn to love again

I don't blame you for anything
You fought back but lost anyway
But this would be nothing more than a nightmare
If you knew your pain would be gone

The future isn't so bright now
But you can't give up just yet
For those who watch over you
For the ones you love and for yourself

You trusted me and only me
Enough that I could sleep by your side at night
I promised you that you wouldn't be hurt anymore
That you could learn to love again

Always remember that I love you
I would make this pain go away
But first you need to open your heart
And let me back in

Don't lose sight of yourself, my love
I couldn't say these words before
So I'll sing them to you right here
I still dream of that future that will last forever
     
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    08-08-2009, 01:12 PM
  #2
Foal
Oh I love it! You are a very creative writer, and this song speaks volumes........ Good job.
     
    08-08-2009, 01:14 PM
  #3
Green Broke
Aw man, what happened to your horse? D:
     
    08-08-2009, 05:03 PM
  #4
Foal
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Originally Posted by sunny06    
Aw man, what happened to your horse? D:
An idiot girl who takes lessons at our stables didn't feel like riding her lesson horse so she decided to ride my 3 year old stallion. She showed toff by yanking on his mouth and kicking him hard, and he bolted through a fence and into a wire cow fence. He got all cut up and now we can't go near him or anything...he's going crazy and im really worried...
     
    08-08-2009, 11:30 PM
  #5
Green Broke
What was she thinking?! Obviously she wasn't. Yeah, I'd sue for sure. 3 year old stallion.. Did she have someone with her?
     
    08-08-2009, 11:54 PM
  #6
Foal
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunny06    
What was she thinking?! Obviously she wasn't. Yeah, I'd sue for sure. 3 year old stallion.. Did she have someone with her?
When she tacked him up, no, but her mom was there. She didn't do anything when I told her daughter to get off my horse.

This was during a lesson, by the way.
There were 6 other kids there and a few parents.
     
    08-08-2009, 11:56 PM
  #7
Green Broke
She didn't listen?! SUE that woman!
     
    08-08-2009, 11:58 PM
  #8
Foal
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunny06    
She didn't listen?! SUE that woman!
We're going to court with it.
The kids like 12 so it should be easy.

The good part is I get to fight for my horse because I bought him with my own money.

I wish I could show you pictures of his injuries...
     
    08-09-2009, 12:00 AM
  #9
Green Broke
Yeah, I'd be interested.

Good luck with the case :) I hope you win.
     
    08-10-2009, 06:29 AM
  #10
Green Broke
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunny06    
Yeah, I'd be interested.

Good luck with the case :) I hope you win.
I second this! I really do hope everything turns out right for you and your horse, I can't imagine going threw what you are. I read your thread about it and it makes me sad that this girl didn't listen to you and it resaulted in your horse getting hurt and becoming afraid of the people that love him. I'm sure he will realize that you love him and that you or your vet are not going to hurt him. Please keep us updated.
     

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