I want to share some stories I wrote and I just love to hear comments
I feel the trot of my horse , as to say “ don’t give up ! Don’t give up ! “ I love my horse but its so hard , I look at the black stallion’s shoulder , I put my hand down and I pat his neck , my friend looks relieved “ set up the jump “ I say , I picked up a flat out canter and keep going in circles till the jump is set up “ READY ! “ yells my friend , I look at the ground , as if it were a real person , a real enemy , I stay calm and trot my horse to the jump , calmly I lift into my jumping position , I feel my horse take off and ……….. we touch the ground , connected , like were the only things in the world , I feel a exploding power and I feel my eyes close and great pain …….. I wake up , I look around , I’m surrounded by doctors and family members , and I have a wrap around my head , “what happened ?? “ I ask “ you fell off your horse “ says the doctor “ oh “ I say I look confused and lost I ask my mom how my horse is she replies “ good I think we got that covered for a day “ I turn to the doctor “ when can I go home “ he replies “ soon , just sit tight and no riding for a while “ ……. Days go by and my parents report back to me about Loco my baby , my life , my horse ………. Its time to go home , I pack up and I head home the doctor says “ no riding ! “ and my parents made sure I did not a week went by and my parents said something to me that was every horse owners nightmare “ we have to sell your horse whats the point of keeping a horse you can't ride “ and then my dad adds so meanly “its like its stealing our money “ I look at them not even stopping to think or try to hold the tears “ I HATE YOU ! “ I say bursting into tears , heading to the barn , my parents stop for a minute then follow , I grab the lead rope and clip it on Loco’s halter , I lead him out of the stall and I try to find a mounting block , with blurry eyes , I hop up , not so gracefully and before thinking , I pick up a gallop holding on for dear life , I go wherever Loco wanted to go , we went to a big field , miles from my house , I never ever missed my parents and I never thinked during the time , I had grabbed my backpack , which I had food in , before I left and we had a creek and a big field of grass , I stayed there for 1 week , I heard my parents so I ran , and finally the days became cold it was Nov. 8th and we headed home , my parents grabbed me in hugs , pushing them away , I led my horse to the stall , “ sweetie are you okay ? “ they asked “ I came back to get a coat and im leaving again “ I said “ your not going anywhere “ they said “ if loco does not then I wont “ I answered “ I don’t care about that horse of yours ! YOUR NOT LEAVING and your horse is ! END OF DISCUSSION ! “ they said I walked to the house …… two days later …… “ we sold the horse “ they said I did not answer I ran to the stable again , they caught me before getting there
I am so stuck on this story ...........
anyone please help me !!!!!!!!11