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post #21 of 53 Old 12-14-2010, 09:53 AM
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My only issue is that she bought this awesome stallion for only 1000. Now, he wasn't trained and I don't know much about the breed but the way you described the sire, it seems as though he was a great champion. I would think he was worth much more than 1000. My other concern is that he was going to be used as a lesson pony and kept a stud. That means children would have been riding a stallion, not really a normal occurance. What I was thinking was maybe you could say something like part of your deal was that the riding school would get free breedings or that you would show him as if you were a student of theres to bring them publicity to help them to gain more students or money... It's just a thought.... Either way the story is great and you should keep going.

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post #22 of 53 Old 12-14-2010, 02:56 PM Thread Starter
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hahah i was atually thinlking the same thing about the lesson pony stud, it was only after i was reading it after i posted it that i was about to edit it that it wouldnt let me (10 minutes was over), oh and i was meant to say that the riding school would have his first foal out of him, i may have forgotten to put that in there sorry.
but if it is that inaccurate, i may as well stop lol i would change it if i could but i cant :(
so is it worth carrying on Farmpony??

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post #23 of 53 Old 12-14-2010, 08:35 PM
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I think it is. People go back and edit stories all the time. It's how they perfect them. I think it's great.

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post #24 of 53 Old 12-14-2010, 08:44 PM Thread Starter
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ok then i may as well continue it. i cant edit it as my 10 minutes was up days ago get what i mean??

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post #25 of 53 Old 12-18-2010, 08:42 PM
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more please!

Its a pretty good story!

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post #26 of 53 Old 12-18-2010, 08:53 PM
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PLZ keep going :)
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post #27 of 53 Old 12-20-2010, 01:54 AM Thread Starter
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ok, will write more tonight if I am not too tired

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post #28 of 53 Old 12-20-2010, 07:23 AM
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Hope ur not to tired.

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post #29 of 53 Old 12-20-2010, 04:23 PM Thread Starter
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Hahahah lol, I was to tired sorry :(
But more to come tonight

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post #30 of 53 Old 12-21-2010, 03:26 PM
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What time tonight?

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