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        07-10-2009, 03:14 PM
    Green Broke
    Not long after the waterworks, they arrived at Chase’s house. Chase carried Anny, who had fallen asleep, in and laid her on the couch. Tom, Lexi’s husband strutted out, acting like he knew what was goin on. Seeing Anny’s busted lip, he said “Aww she did something dumb, didn’t she?”, with this Chad became infuriated, and tried to keep his voice down. After reciting the story, Tom felt bad.
    “Chase, can you pick her up, she can sleep in bed with Lexi, I’m good on the couch.” He said, looking down.
    Anny woke up and said “Nah, I can walk.” She got up and got Lei to follow her into Lexi’s room.
    “No Lex, it’s me, Anny.”
    “Anny! Baby girl, wait how’re you here, at 2:30 AM?!”
    “Wade hit me, Chase came and got me.”
    Lexi hugged her younger sister, and pushes the hair out of her eyes. She told Anny no matter what, she is always welcomed here and never will be turned away. Smiling Anny lays down, and faced the wall. The last words said that night were “Love you Lexi.” before she was knocked out.
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        07-14-2009, 12:32 AM
    Green Broke
    More please?
        07-16-2009, 03:44 PM
    This is good I demand more lol jk ummm for title how about the life of anny lol idk
        07-16-2009, 04:17 PM
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    Sweet Dreams?
        07-16-2009, 11:00 PM
    Green Broke
    Lots of cussing? O.O
        07-17-2009, 02:21 AM
    Green Broke
    I like Sweet Dreams .

    No it gets worse, sunny.

    I guess ill write more tonight!
        07-17-2009, 02:25 AM
    Green Broke
    Awaking the next morning, Anny stares at the ceiling, trying to remember what had happened the previous night. Pulling the bed sheet up to her chin, shivering. Within minutes she rolled to her side, and then yanked her phone out of her back pocket. No new messages. Sliding the phone back into its hiding place, Anny get s up and dragged herself to the kitchen. She sat down at the table, Tom looked at her an grinned.
    “Eh, Princess Annabella! What shall it be this glorious morning?!” Tom sang
    “Shut up, I ain’t no princess gimme coffee and sausage… please.” Anny snapped back, she was in no good mood.
    “Yes ma’am.” Tom replied hurriedly rushing to meet her wishes.
    A brief ‘thank you’ was said before she chugged down the coffee and vacuumed up her sausage. She went to the bathroom, washed her face and brushed her hair; pulling it up into a ponytail, before wondering off to find Chase.
        07-17-2009, 11:22 AM
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    I do have a couple comments though... one thing, is it summer break? Where is school in all this and another, Chase has been her guy friend for maybe two weeks I think you said but they are acting like theyv'e been together for months... is that normal teen dating now days? OH GOSH I MUST BE OLD!
        07-17-2009, 01:13 PM
    Farmpony chase is annys brother chad is her friend
        07-17-2009, 03:12 PM
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    Oh sorry... got the names mixed, but either way they seem too close too quick... right?

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