Told through the horses point of view THE BRUMBY KING please read and comment - The Horse Forum
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
post #1 of 5 Old 06-29-2011, 09:49 AM Thread Starter
Started
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: victoria australia
Posts: 2,126
• Horses: 3
Told through the horses point of view THE BRUMBY KING please read and comment

I breathed heavily, knowing the time was soon, the time he would come and rule the wild brumbies, my son.
I have not always been a wild brumby, I used to have a master, but Jupiter, the Brumby King came and took me away. I wanted to stay with my master, but as much as I tried to resist, I couldn’t, he was too strong and intelligent.
I fought it for a long time, but then realised I wanted to stay more then ever. I wanted to stay with my new herd, which I was now the head off, and I wanted to stay with Jupiter.
I looked up lovingly at him, and he touched his nose to my bulging belly and whickered softly. I tried to wicker back, but all that came out was a weak snort.
Then I felt a pain, a strong pain… I whinnied loudly now, and suddenly, a small weak whinny answered me. I looked around, and there, in a small wet pile on the dusty ground lay my beautiful baby boy, the new prince of the highlands, dear little footloose.
I could tell instantly he was different, he had the look in his eyes, and he was alert and aware.

After many hours, we walked outside of our little cave and showed little footloose the outside world, he ran around and chased the kangaroos, Jupiter joined in the running and exploring too, and watching the two of them together was beautiful.
Footloose obviously looked up to Jupiter, seeing him not as a father but as a hero.

I took Footloose back to the herd and noticed how much the others all ready respected him, running over to him as if he were already king, the other foals loved him too.
While he ran off playing I nuzzled Jupiter, and thought about what the next few years would bring…



not finished yet

Live fast, have fun and be a bit mischievous! -Louis Tomlinson
Marlea Warlea is offline  
Sponsored Links
Advertisement
 
post #2 of 5 Old 06-29-2011, 10:58 PM Thread Starter
Started
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: victoria australia
Posts: 2,126
• Horses: 3
anyone?

Live fast, have fun and be a bit mischievous! -Louis Tomlinson
Marlea Warlea is offline  
post #3 of 5 Old 06-30-2011, 05:57 PM
Weanling
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 469
• Horses: 0
Very good! I love all your stories.
SaddleUp158 is offline  
post #4 of 5 Old 06-30-2011, 07:13 PM
Green Broke
 
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: At The End Of That Rainbow To Yer Left
Posts: 3,171
• Horses: 4
GRRRREAT!!!!! Good Job!

If you want a stable friendship, get a horse.
lildonkey8 is offline  
post #5 of 5 Old 06-30-2011, 11:30 PM Thread Starter
Started
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: victoria australia
Posts: 2,126
• Horses: 3
i'll probably continue to write it. But not for a while.

I still have a loooooooooooong way to go on my poppy story

i have added more BTW so please read!

Live fast, have fun and be a bit mischievous! -Louis Tomlinson
Marlea Warlea is offline  
Reply

Quick Reply
Message:
Options

Register Now



In order to be able to post messages on the The Horse Forum forums, you must first register.

Already have a Horse Forum account?
Members are allowed only one account per person at the Horse Forum, so if you've made an account here in the past you'll need to continue using that account. Please do not create a new account or you may lose access to the Horse Forum. If you need help recovering your existing account, please Contact Us. We'll be glad to help!

New to the Horse Forum?
Please choose a username you will be satisfied with using for the duration of your membership at the Horse Forum. We do not change members' usernames upon request because that would make it difficult for everyone to keep track of who is who on the forum. For that reason, please do not incorporate your horse's name into your username so that you are not stuck with a username related to a horse you may no longer have some day, or use any other username you may no longer identify with or care for in the future.



User Name:
Password
Please enter a password for your user account. Note that passwords are case-sensitive.

Password:


Confirm Password:
Email Address
Please enter a valid email address for yourself.

Email Address:
OR

Log-in









Human Verification

In order to verify that you are a human and not a spam bot, please enter the answer into the following box below based on the instructions contained in the graphic.


Old Thread Warning
This thread is more than 90 days old. When a thread is this old, it is often better to start a new thread rather than post to it. However, If you feel you have something of value to add to this particular thread, you can do so by checking the box below before submitting your post.

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Show Printable Version
Email this Page Email this Page



Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Horses for sale in King city,Mo HopalongCassidy Horses for Sale 5 01-13-2015 08:14 AM
Western Pleasure Horses . . . whats the point. . . . Luv My Quarter Horse Western Pleasure 50 07-11-2011 09:46 PM
Sweden - from a riders point of view *video* :P Zab Trail Riding 13 07-31-2009 03:05 PM
Your Point of View, Please. Sw898989 Horse Training 2 08-11-2007 06:17 PM

Posting Rules  
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

 
For the best viewing experience please update your browser to Google Chrome