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"Outta my way." Ashlynn says waving me away with the back of her hand. She slams the stable door shut, hard enough for the latch to catch on. But hard enough to startle her gelding Royal Prise. He snorts and shifts sideways, watching the door. Ashlynn doesn't give him a second glance. I roll my eyes and spot Alley leading her horse Pretty Girl to a pair of cross ties.
"Want some help?" I ask snatching up a curry comb from Alley's tack box. Alley smiles, "of course." I begin to run the brush over her spotted coat.
"Guess what?" Alley says mysteriously. oh dear.
"What?" Trying not to sound to curious. "Did you see the new boy? He rides western too! She asks smiling " He's so hot!!"
Alley is my best friend. She has been since 3rd grade. But I don't think she's ever going to understand that I don't really have an interest in boys. I mean of course I've had crushes and all. But nothing I want to act on.
*I feel like it's not intersting
I know I'm not that great of a writer but usually I can find something to keep the story going. But I feel really stuck now. And it's only the beginning
please tell me if you think it's getting borning.