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    11-30-2011, 03:20 PM
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You wanna read a story, READ THIS ONE!!

Have you ever had that feeling that your been watched? That's pretty much what this story is going to start off with. Hehehe (evil laugh). You invited your friend to stay for the night. So you asked her, what do you wanna do? Your friend said I dunno, maybe we can for a trail ride? You said, sure why not? So You are saddling up your tack and she is doing hers. But you're having this feeling that you're being watched, like someone is over your shoulder. You turn around to see if anything is there....nothing living, just an old creepy barn. So then you went back to your horse and was very cautious of what was behind you......CRASH!... What was that? Your friend said. I don't know. So you and your friend got on your horses and went for a ride on the trails. From what was once a sunny day that day became darker and darker the longer you guys went. It was so quiet that you could hear your horse's heart beat. After 20 minutes into the ride, you guys wanted to practice sit a buck in a pasture. But you looked through the bushes and saw a red bright glowing light! What could that be? You asked. What could what be? Your friend answered. Can't you see that glowing light? She said what glowing light? When you turned back to see where it was it wasn't there anymore. So you said, okay lets get out of here, I must have a fever or something. Your friend said okay. So you got to your barn and untacked your horses. Your friend asked you what was wrong once more and you told her the same thing..you saw a red glowing light appearing in the bush. You wanna know what that was? That Red, shiny, glowing light was......SANTA!!! Lol he called your number and told you that he didn't mean to scare you in the barn, he just stubbed his toe on a block of wood your dad left in the barn. And that red light happens when ever he's around you. Lol I didn't know how to end the story but I hope you guys loved it! :P
     
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    12-03-2011, 10:00 AM
  #2
Weanling
You are saddling up your tack- don't you mean horse not tack?
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    12-03-2011, 11:55 AM
  #3
Banned
Yes sorry, typo :P
     
    12-18-2011, 09:41 PM
  #4
Started
Good story but, add some punctuation and watch your spelling.
     
    12-18-2011, 09:51 PM
  #5
Foal
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Originally Posted by whispering willow    
Yes sorry, typo :P
I thought your story was very cute. There's always a critic.
     
    12-18-2011, 10:48 PM
  #6
Foal
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Originally Posted by Samstead    
Good story but, add some punctuation and watch your spelling.
LOL -- In that case, where does the comma above belong?
     
    12-18-2011, 11:18 PM
  #7
Started
Lol sorry typing and I don't exactly get along
     
    12-19-2011, 12:25 PM
  #8
Banned
Lol thanks guys
     

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