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        03-02-2010, 01:39 PM
      #1
    Yearling
    Critique My Website Please!!

    I would just love opinions on my website! I have been working really hard on it! And I still have a lot to do but think its good to the point where I can show people! So please let me know what you think of it!!

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        03-02-2010, 01:49 PM
      #2
    Banned
    Please proof read it. There is a typing error right on the main page. I assume you want to say 'been' not 'bee'.

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    Welcome to Equestrian Rhythm. This site had bee put together to teach the world about the benefits of Equestrian Rhythm Beads and Magnetic Therapy.
         
        03-02-2010, 01:52 PM
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    Yearling
    Thanks, fixed it :)
         
        03-02-2010, 02:25 PM
      #4
    Green Broke
    The music was enough to make me get off the site so didn't spend much time looking. Thumbnails were not very easy to see either
         
        03-02-2010, 02:37 PM
      #5
    Banned
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    Originally Posted by churumbeque    
    The music was enough to make me get off the site so didn't spend much time looking.
    Glad I had my speakers down all the way.

    I think music has no place on web sites. If you want people to be able to visit your site and not have to rush to turn speakers down and such please do not put music on it. Many people visit sites at work, or even when they baby is sleeping next to them. Professionally done websites do not need music to sell the product.
         
        03-02-2010, 03:05 PM
      #6
    Trained
    ^^ Agree with the posts above. Plus that music sucked!
         
        03-02-2010, 03:10 PM
      #7
    Showing
    I usually have my speakers off so that wasn't a problem but when I looked at the colors and what they mean, I could not read the yellow print at all and Lime wasn't a whole lot better - but readable.

    Under BLACK,
    Black


    Black is not a color. It is the absence of all color, it absorbs light. What white reveals, black conceals. Black is the most misunderstood color. Black symbolizes death in some cultures yet Native Americans thought black was good because it was the color of soil which gives life. Black has been linked to the unknown and unseen; however, in a positive state black is seen as a restful emptiness into which anything may emerge and disappear again.
    You forgot the word "of" which I put into the paragraph above in burgundy and change the comma to a semicolon after "unseen" in the next line.
         
        03-02-2010, 03:14 PM
      #8
    Weanling
    I think it was great! Hope you sell some stuff :)
         
        03-02-2010, 04:32 PM
      #9
    Yearling
    Im sorry guys! I was experimenting with the music! And I hated it too! But I totally forgot to take it down, its gone now!
         
        03-02-2010, 06:47 PM
      #10
    Weanling
    Awww I liked the music...
         

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