My "critique"?? You look LOVELY! Like an absolutely perfectly matched pair...your position is essentially perfect as I can tell. He looks alert, happy, like he LOVES HIS JOB/loves jumping...you are truly a great looking pair who appear equally matched and to be working in concert with one another.
In some pics, his front end is a bit uneven but as I understand, that can be from jumping obstacles that may not challenge him quite enough height-wise to cause him to "bother" to pick 'em up high and put the fullest effort in, since he may feel the height is "beneath him" (?)... I could be totally wrong and I'm sure I'll be told so if that is the case
Also I believe I've been told/read/remember that with horses newer to jumping/younger horses, evening out in the front can come with time & experience.
Let's wait till the experts get on and they can rip apart my comments and give you the correct ones (that was somewhat tounge in cheek, FYI!) :0)
Hey, I just think you guys are doing a great job out there (in those pics) and having the fun/challenge the sport was meant to induce! More power to you!!! And especially keep up the hard work...it's paying off. :0)