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        08-04-2008, 11:46 PM
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    Weanling
    EveryOne Please check my website out

    Please check out my website http://parkerhorseranch.piczo.com and tell me what you think of my brand new website?
         
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        08-05-2008, 03:25 AM
      #2
    Trained
    Lookin good :)
         
        08-05-2008, 09:44 AM
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    Yearling
    Is English your first language? There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. Maybe you have someone who can read through all your sentences and correct them for you?

    Particularly the page about riding lessons. If you are trying to gain business through your web page you should definitely re-write that page. I had a go to correct it but it needs re-writing.
         
        08-05-2008, 10:27 AM
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    Weanling
    Videos are a bit dark-and I agree with above-needs to re written and proof read-let me know if you need help.
         
        08-05-2008, 10:38 AM
      #5
    Super Moderator
    It's a really nice start. I also noticed some gramatical errors and a couple spelling goofs that should be fixed. But it's a really great start!
         
        08-05-2008, 11:06 AM
      #6
    Weanling
    Ok I need help !! Tell me which part of my website?
         
        08-05-2008, 11:12 AM
      #7
    Weanling
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Kirsti Arndt
    videos are a bit dark-and I agree with above-needs to re written and proof read-let me know if you need help.
    Are you talking about the first video under welcome to Parker horse ranch or you talking about one under luke thd duke or our horses or offsprings?
         
        08-06-2008, 02:11 PM
      #8
    Weanling
    I had some new pictures and I change it around a little bit, but I will be working on my grammar and word in a little while.
         

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