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post #1 of 8 Old 08-04-2008, 11:46 PM Thread Starter
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EveryOne Please check my website out

Please check out my website http://parkerhorseranch.piczo.com and tell me what you think of my brand new website?
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post #2 of 8 Old 08-05-2008, 03:25 AM
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lookin good :)

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post #3 of 8 Old 08-05-2008, 09:44 AM
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Is English your first language? There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. Maybe you have someone who can read through all your sentences and correct them for you?

Particularly the page about riding lessons. If you are trying to gain business through your web page you should definitely re-write that page. I had a go to correct it but it needs re-writing.
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post #4 of 8 Old 08-05-2008, 10:27 AM
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videos are a bit dark-and i agree with above-needs to re written and proof read-let me know if you need help.

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post #5 of 8 Old 08-05-2008, 10:38 AM
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it's a really nice start. I also noticed some gramatical errors and a couple spelling goofs that should be fixed. But it's a really great start!

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post #6 of 8 Old 08-05-2008, 11:06 AM Thread Starter
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Ok I need help !! Tell me which part of my website?
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post #7 of 8 Old 08-05-2008, 11:12 AM Thread Starter
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Originally Posted by Kirsti Arndt
videos are a bit dark-and i agree with above-needs to re written and proof read-let me know if you need help.
Are you talking about the first video under welcome to Parker horse ranch or you talking about one under luke thd duke or our horses or offsprings?
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post #8 of 8 Old 08-06-2008, 02:11 PM Thread Starter
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I had some new pictures and I change it around a little bit, but I will be working on my grammer and word in a little while.
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