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        01-25-2013, 12:33 AM
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    Trained
    It's done! Opinions, anyone!?

    Worked forever on this things, and other then my credit card not working so not having the finished domain name and the annoying ads, what do you guys think?

    Please let me know if you see any errors/broken links, etc.

    The graphic done on the contact page was made by HF's very own Red Gate Farm!!

    Whispering Secret Arabians | Wix.com

    Thanks everyone!
         
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        01-25-2013, 12:39 AM
      #2
    Trained
    All the links work and I like it! I drooled a little over those studlies of yours!
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        01-25-2013, 12:45 AM
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    Banned
    Worked good for me. Looks great
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        01-25-2013, 12:49 AM
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    Yearling
    Maybe its just my phone but the stallions pictures aren't showing up. Gorgeous mares though! I love Arabs :)
    Posted via Mobile Device
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        01-25-2013, 12:53 AM
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    Trained
    Everything worked for me, looks great!
         
        01-25-2013, 12:59 AM
      #6
    Trained
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by SorrelHorse    
    All the links work and I like it! I drooled a little over those studlies of yours!
    Thank you!
    I think they're kinda handsome myself.
         
        01-25-2013, 01:00 AM
      #7
    Banned
    Everything looks really good. I read every word looking for typos, and found none. The only thing I would say is that this sentence sounds a bit informal:

    Lady has been a member of our family since she was a mere four months old, and our family mount for many years and taught all of us kids how to ride, as well as produced some fantastic Arabian foals throughout the years. She is one of our treasured family member.

    It's the all of us kids part. To me that's what you would say, but not write. But I am old school English and very formal. Personally I'd say, all of the children in our family.

    But I am nitpicking and anal.

    Also I find the font of the name of the horse hard to read, this bit


    HFA Hi Que
    1989 Black Arabian Mare​
    (Triple A Hardee x Khalia Que)

    The fact that I am nitpicking on such small things, really means more than you realize, I am so over the top about things, you have no idea! It looks great!
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        01-25-2013, 01:01 AM
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    Trained
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Muppetgirl    
    Worked good for me. Looks great
    Thanks!
         
        01-25-2013, 01:05 AM
      #9
    Trained
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by AlexS    
    Everything looks really good. I read every word looking for typos, and found none. The only thing I would say is that this sentence sounds a bit informal:

    Lady has been a member of our family since she was a mere four months old, and our family mount for many years and taught all of us kids how to ride, as well as produced some fantastic Arabian foals throughout the years. She is one of our treasured family member.

    It's the all of us kids part. To me that's what you would say, but not write. But I am old school English and very formal. Personally I'd say, all of the children in our family.

    But I am nitpicking and anal.

    Also I find the font of the name of the horse hard to read, this bit


    HFA Hi Que
    1989 Black Arabian Mare​
    (Triple A Hardee x Khalia Que)

    The fact that I am nitpicking on such small things, really means more than you realize, I am so over the top about things, you have no idea! It looks great!
    LOL
    Thanks Alex!

    I totally get what you're saying. Maybe if I went "...mount for years. As well as teaching the family to ride, she was produced.." ?

    Is the type of font that's hard to read?
         
        01-25-2013, 01:06 AM
      #10
    Trained
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by countrylove    
    Maybe its just my phone but the stallions pictures aren't showing up. Gorgeous mares though! I love Arabs :)
    Posted via Mobile Device
    I haven't figured out if there's something in the builders setting for a Mobile or Internet version. It didn't work on my phone for awhile, but now it is.
    Maybe it was just a slow connection?

    Thanks!
         

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