Not sure what to say. It's hard to see much detail from that distance. and you stated pretty much what i could see, what with her wanting to avoid contact and come behind the bit. It looks to me that you are just working along and right about where you are supposed to be.
I was wondering about your leg yield, it looked like there was very little forward motion. But, maybe the clinician wanted you to over emphasize the sidewasy. Without being close to hear her, and see detail, I can only say that .