She wanted comments and that is what she got. I'm sure they are not what she expected but they are what she needs. My elders also taught me not to ask a question that I don't want to know the answer to.
I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings, but I kinda have to agree with Kevin on this one. Equineangel, you really should spend some more time with a quality instructor to learn the finer points before trying to teach others. If you'd like to get your feet wet giving lessons, volunteering with therapeutic centers, or even offering to do some leadline lessons for your trainer is a great way to get started!