Originally Posted by cosmomomo
i think its really good :) the different layers are cool, but a bit distracting. They work best when you are doing the lunging bit :)
Thanks yeah they are a bit distracting lol but I still like it :)
Originally Posted by Sahara
On one hand it has too much fading in and out of scenes and layering. Nothing has a chance to sink in before it changes again. It doesn't allow the viewer to process what is being viewed. On the other hand, if you disregard the content of the video, the effects are pretty cool. The question is, what are trying to express to the viewer?
I'm not really trying to express anything to the viewer just wanted to make a video and see how it turned out.
Originally Posted by Outbound
Don't take this the wrong way but it's a mess. You overdo the super imposing of images and there's no narrative to the whole thing, it's just a collection of random shots. Also, it ends abruptly, pretty much just confusing the viewer.
Don't take any of this the wrong way, video production is a more complicated process than it looks and my first videos were also a mess.
Instead of just shooting random stuff sit down first and plan out what you want to accomplish, what story do you want to tell visually.
Don't take offense at anything I've said. It's all meant as constructive criticism.
Hmmm... ok em thanks for the constructive criticism I suppose as I said before didn't really want to tell a story visually and didn't really know that I had
to have a narrative to the whole thing lol
Thanks for the advice anyway will take it all on board and didn't take offense to any of it.