Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Western Pennsylvania
Critique my ad?
Well..I've decided to sell Alahna. I want to keep her, but she isn't the best match for what I want right now.
Soo..here's what I wrote up for her ad:
"Looking for your new trail partner? This mare does it all!
Alahna is a 7yo OTTB mare that I bought 400-500# underweight. She still has a bit more to gain, but she's almost there and looking so much better.
Alahna is about as bombproof as they come, has only done one stop and stare at a deer that popped out in front of us out on the trail. She clips, bathes, hops right on any trailer, and stands tied without fidgeting. She goes uo and down hills, through water, over logs, and more! You can take her out alone or with a group, she leads/follows, and she has no problem staying behind the others if you ask.
Alahna has a ton of go if you ask, but is just as content to go slow. She would be a great gaming or hunter/jumper prospect. I'm comfortable putting anyone on her and sending them on a trail, and I'm sure you'll be as well.
$1500 to good home."
Soo..what's everyone think? I haven't decided on pictures just yet, but the ones I used in my confo thread will be on there.
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