Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: British Columbia
The thing that concerns me is that your ad makes it look as if you're lying about her condition. You say one of the reasons you're selling is because she's getting 'stiff' and then you go onto emphasize that she is not a 'broken down horse' or 'bag of bones' which can be a bit misleading.
The pictures you have are okay, but they seem a bit off to me? Carrying her head at her knees and bending awkwardly in a couple of them. And maybe include some good conformation shots. I have to say the angle of the second picture on the Craigslist ad makes her look downright silly
Remember, with an initial ad you don't have to disclose everything, people assume you don't, so by disclosing all of her vices can lead people to assume there is MORE wrong with her. I don't mean to lie, but try to emphasize her strong points.
Also, is she a strictly Western horse? Does she go English? Does she have any accomplishments?