okidoki, second draft. i changed a few things based on the comments that were left, however im really unsure about the last paragraph.
Hello, my name is [My name] and I saw your ad for [Horse’s Name].
I am not a beginner rider; I have been trained in jumping, but I am looking for a dressage horse as I am planning on pursuing that course. I am looking for a horse that has enough energy to make things interesting, yet a horse that I can control without too much difficulty.
From the ad, it sounds as though [horse’s name] has the qualities I am looking for in a potential mount. I do however have a few questions. First of all, is she patient? Does she constantly want to go faster or keep moving? While grooming does she stand and let you brush her or does she constantly move around waiting for you finish? Secondly, what type of rider does she need? Can almost anybody ride her comfortable or does she need a confident experienced rider in order for her to perform? Does she have any bad habits such as bucking or bolting that may be a concern.
As I am only 14 y/o, my trainer would also have to be there if we were to arrange a time to view the horse.
If you need to verify that I'm not just a teenager 'wish buying', you may contact my parent/guardian at [phone number] His/her name is [parent’s name]. If you would like to contact my trainer, her name is [Name] and you can reach her at [phone number]. If you are interested in contacting me you can reach me at [phone number] or [cell number].