This is from my first show this year. I showed when I was younger and then started showing this past year. I decided to just do ground poles to get a feel for the hunters and enjoyed it greatly. I ride at a small lesson barn, and these are the small schooling shows at my barn, very informal. We are now up to jumping 18"-2 foot range. He really isn't a hunter horse, and doesn't have a hunter look. Shows are very very informal though. I will try to get better pics later, but this is all I have for now. My release isn't that great, but it is ground poles. Excuse my derp face in some of these pics
These angles don't show enough of your whole body to really tell you anything.
What I see is your way to tense through yout shoulders to wrists, compromising your hip angle with how tense you are.
Your reins are way to long and I'm pretty sure your stirrups should go up a few holes.
Thank you, and no I wish he was mine. Here is a pic from our most recent show and a better angle. Thought I would throw in that I have scoliosis and bad back problems that are currently being treated. This has helped with the stiffness throughout my body. My form has drastically improved over the past couple of months after I started working intensivley with our manager.