Sandsarita - I am sorry for your dillema and my heart goes out to you for your situation. I have to say, that I am super proud of you for branching out and trying a different approach to riding under a different coach, and I am super pleased that you were able to not only see the difference, understand the difference, but also to feel the difference.
This picture here, you are greatly insecure and if your Coach was happy with that - oh my goodness gracious:
This one is 99% better than the first, and if you got yelled at for this, oh my goodness gracious.
You are very close to the Classical Millitary Style and far much more functional here, than you were in the 1st. Your heels are anchoring you, your leg at at the girth, your seat is not in the saddle, while yet freeing your horses back, you are behind your horse and over his center of gravity, your back has a bit of a roach to it, but so what - you are giving a nice relase and you are looking up and ahead...wow, other than just a smidge of tweaks - you are pretty much dead on. I give you great praises for this one: