I think you both look great, you have a good position and good release. I don't think you need to lean any more forward. Many people want to over-release on smaller crossrails like that, but you really just need to get your weight out of the saddle and release your horse's mouth so she can stretch. You should only be leaning forward enough for that, no more. You look good!!!
The basest horn of his hoof is more musical than the pipe of Hermes.
He's of the color of the nutmeg and of the heart of the ginger.
His neigh is like the bidding of a monarch,
And his countenance enforces homage.
- William Shakespeare