I loved that ride. I loved how forward you both were!
I'm not the greatest at critique but a few things I noticed:
I will echo what Velvets said and keep your hands a little higher to help support.
A little more steadier in the corners- the pace was fine, but you need to shift your weight on to the outside seatbone and back so that she can utilize the corner with a wee bit more impulsion and keep her shoulder from dropping in. After the diagonal and the last outside line it looked a little like your center of balance was over her forehand and she scrambled for a few steps to keep her balance. I thought you did very well over all. Pretty good ride, so I cannot pick it apart!