can't post on your thread, too young but here's what I would say:
Looks good to me! Some bad jumps of course, but everyone has those! Something I was noticing was that your hrose was landing on the wrong lead sometimes...not sure how to fix that but I'm sure someone here knows. Also you're popping up a little bit quickly in your twopoint sometimes I noticed, but other than that you look great!
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