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It's done! Opinions, anyone!?
Worked forever on this things, and other then my credit card not working so not having the finished domain name and the annoying ads, what do you guys think?
Please let me know if you see any errors/broken links, etc.
The graphic done on the contact page was made by HF's very own Red Gate Farm!! :D
Whispering Secret Arabians | Wix.com
All the links work and I like it! I drooled a little over those studlies of yours!
Worked good for me:-). Looks great:-)
Maybe its just my phone but the stallions pictures aren't showing up. Gorgeous mares though! I love Arabs :)
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Everything worked for me, looks great!
I think they're kinda handsome myself. :lol:
Everything looks really good. I read every word looking for typos, and found none. The only thing I would say is that this sentence sounds a bit informal:
Lady has been a member of our family since she was a mere four months old, and our family mount for many years and taught all of us kids how to ride, as well as produced some fantastic Arabian foals throughout the years. She is one of our treasured family member.
It's the all of us kids part. To me that's what you would say, but not write. But I am old school English and very formal. Personally I'd say, all of the children in our family.
But I am nitpicking and anal.
Also I find the font of the name of the horse hard to read, this bit
HFA Hi Que
1989 Black Arabian Mare
(Triple A Hardee x Khalia Que)
The fact that I am nitpicking on such small things, really means more than you realize, I am so over the top about things, you have no idea! It looks great!
I totally get what you're saying. Maybe if I went "...mount for years. As well as teaching the family to ride, she was produced.." ?
Is the type of font that's hard to read?
Maybe it was just a slow connection?
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