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Poem I wrote...
Would love some critiques on it.
Hands of leather and sun baked skin
A slender body with shirt tucked in
Jeans aged to grey...stained and torn
Boots cracked and faded...duely worn
Atop a horse she rides with grace
With years of work upon her face
Hair pulled back to show her eyes
The eternal darkness of midnight skies
She rides alone 'til time does end
So with this time she will tend
Reins in hand and rope at side
She looks no more for Him to guide
A dwindling hope that died with age
Has rekindled itself with sorrow and rage
But no one will know on her face of stone
As she rides through life all alone
But she has work to do...cattle to feed
Pastures to plant and crops to seed
No reason to dwell on what's no longer there
She's given up waiting for someone to care.
Very emotional.. and a little sad..
very sad....but very good!
Aww I like it. A little sad but very good :)
saaaad............ I like your idea, and to tell the truth, i've been wanting to write a Cowgirl poem/song, but it never fell together very well.....
i love it
That is a really good poem. Sad but good. :'')
haha thank you guys. I always find it easier to write sad poems versus happy ones.
That's an amazing poem. Thought about entering it in any contests?
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