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Tobysthebesthorseever 04-24-2013 03:34 PM

Don't laugh! Horse Poem.
 
Ooooookkkkaaaaaayyyy.
I wrote a poem about my horse, and please please please don't laugh, it was my first attempt. I'm only showing you guys this cuz I'll never met you. So here goes.

Borrowed Wings

Toby's hooves lend me wings,
I love his horsey smell.
And when his head he brings
Closer to my chest
All my worries are out to rest.

Toby puts other horses to shame
With his golden coat and mane.
I love him dearly with all my heart,
And I hope we never have to part.

This poem comes from deep within a young girl's stolen heart.
For this little girl
Could not write verses
Without getting a headache fit to send her to the nurse's.

Toby's beauty has inspired
This young girl
To write about her beloved friend
Whose hooves lend her wings.
- Tobysthebesthorseever

Don't laugh!!! Please!!!

Tobysthebesthorseever 05-04-2013 11:00 AM

I wanted someone to say something!!!! But maybe it was so bad....no one had anything to say except to laugh....?

Tobysthebesthorseever 05-07-2013 08:19 AM

Pleeeeeaaaassssseeeeee I want to know how other people think it is!!! Is it good? Is it bad? PLEASE!!!

Red Gate Farm 05-07-2013 08:43 AM

Not laughing at all :-)

Any poem, prose or story written from the heart is good. You wrote this from the heart and your love for your horse shows through in your words.

Tobysthebesthorseever 05-07-2013 09:45 AM

Yay!!!! Someone replied!!!! Thanks you for saying something!!! And thanks for thinking that it is at least okay. My mom said it was good. But moms always say that :)

michaelvanessa 05-09-2013 09:52 AM

horse poems
 
i thought it was great and i enjoyed reading it.
many thanks.

Tobysthebesthorseever 05-10-2013 02:13 PM

Thank you!!!!!!!!

michaelvanessa 05-10-2013 05:11 PM

horse poems
 
hiya you imspired me to rite one lol.
i think you did a great poem.

Tobysthebesthorseever 05-11-2013 10:44 AM

Oh thanks!!! I just love him so much and I know you love your horses too (who couldn't?!!!??) so I'm sure anyone who loves their horses can write a great poem. Who'll you post yours?

Tobysthebesthorseever 05-11-2013 10:45 AM

*will you post yours?


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