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star struck 11-28-2008 11:10 PM

Mustang Poem I wrote
Here's a poem I jotted down one day..... what do you think?:wink:
"The Mustang"

So many horse,* the wild and free,
*Like birds, flying o'er the grassy sea,
So many horse, none to ride,
Rearing, galloping side by side.
Feet on never a shoe was lain,
Great mouths never marred by pain,
Backs that have* never been scarred by whip,
No harsh cold bit behind the lip.
So many horse the wild and free,
Like birds, flying o'er the grassy sea,
Shall live and die and die and live,
Never taking, never give;
Always there, and always free,
Go thickly galloping on.

free_sprtd 11-28-2008 11:16 PM

awwww I like that! thanks for sharing

Green Jasper 12-03-2008 02:38 PM

Dude!!! Thats so rad. I like it a lot.

DarkChylde 12-04-2008 01:56 PM

Very nice!:D

You should 'just jot' more down, you have talent!

PoptartShop 12-06-2008 12:20 PM

Very good, I like it!

Philnj 12-10-2008 03:09 PM

Very good:D

smrobs 12-12-2008 09:19 PM

Very good and that is how it feels to ride a mustang too. Like flying over the land with freedom you've never felt before. :)

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