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lilkitty90 03-16-2010 08:35 PM

help with an Ode Poem..
 
i have to write an Ode poem and i chose horses. i am TERRIBLE at poetry. and this thing is due tomarrow i at least need a start on how to get this done. it has to be 5 stanza's and 4 lines per stanza and has to have at least one line of personification and some form of rhyme scheme. if you guys can give me a start that would be awesome. or if you want give me the whole thing but it's due tomarrow! of course i'd prefer the whole thing but just like 2-4 lines works on getting me started.

lilkitty90 03-16-2010 09:12 PM

woo nevermind i got it! incase you guys wanted to see it lol here it is.

Ode to my horse

i love you, my dear sweet horse,
you however you should know this already of course.
even though you make me trek around trying to find you for an hour.
when i climb aboard you back and ride i feel full of power.
i spend over 300$'s on a vet,
even though you are only a pet.
yet you give me the wings i lack
and i really want to thank you for that.
you have to have new shoes every 6 weeks
but when i forget, i'll make it up to you with lots of treats
i get up everyday to feed you grain,
in the hail, sleet, snow, or rain.
even when you think it's fun to try to buck me off
i still find it in my heart to fill your feed trough!
people call me crazy for still getting back on
but i know if i don't you'll think you've won
however when i look into your kind eyes
i know i've already got the best prize
my horse i really do love you
and this you know is true

thunderhooves 03-17-2010 02:26 PM

nice! *claps*

PumpkinzMyBaby22 03-30-2010 03:23 AM

very nice!


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