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HorsesAreForever 01-06-2008 10:24 PM

Is it bad??? plz give tips on how to make this better :)
 
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/e...le/Photo18.jpg

dont be afriad to say w.e u want to say it looks better on paper 2 me but i dont think its that bad what do u think its my very first time drawing will :) or any horse lol

Cheval 01-06-2008 10:44 PM

It's really great for your first time. Some suggestions:
- Neck is too long
- Really big ears
- His face looks a bit swollen...maybe make it smaller?

Nice job, though! :)

HorsesAreForever 01-07-2008 02:54 AM

thxs for the reply i knew something was wrong with the face and neck i just couldnt figure it out ty :) ill practice somemore :)

Fisher.Cat. 01-08-2008 07:04 PM

I agree with Cheval and you also need to give the horse more muscle on the shoulder. It looks very weak and not completely attached. I really like the hind-quarters though. Were you working off a picture or doing it by memory?

HorsesAreForever 01-08-2008 07:09 PM

sorta both I would just quickly look at it then try and draw it i know i should have studied it a little more but then the rest i sorta forgot to look at the picture xD thanks for the reply :) lol if i draw another one ill post it to see if i've improved any

Magic 01-12-2008 03:05 AM

It looks good, just the head is a bit unproportional, the neck is a little too long, and maybe make the shoulder a bit wider/larger? good job though!

BudCap 01-12-2008 11:55 PM

When you are stuck on what is wrong with a drawing I have had my art professors tell me to look at the work upside down in a mirror. This detaches you from your drawing a bit (if you have ever drawn something and thought it was fantastic and then come back to look at it a couple months later and went yuck! then you know what I mean by being detached) and a different view sometimes lets you see what you couldn't before.

HorsesAreForever 01-13-2008 06:54 PM

lol i think i might do that thanks for ur replys :) ill post a new drawing soon to see if u guys think i got any better


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