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Is it bad??? plz give tips on how to make this better :)
dont be afriad to say w.e u want to say it looks better on paper 2 me but i dont think its that bad what do u think its my very first time drawing will :) or any horse lol
It's really great for your first time. Some suggestions:
- Neck is too long
- Really big ears
- His face looks a bit swollen...maybe make it smaller?
Nice job, though! :)
thxs for the reply i knew something was wrong with the face and neck i just couldnt figure it out ty :) ill practice somemore :)
I agree with Cheval and you also need to give the horse more muscle on the shoulder. It looks very weak and not completely attached. I really like the hind-quarters though. Were you working off a picture or doing it by memory?
sorta both I would just quickly look at it then try and draw it i know i should have studied it a little more but then the rest i sorta forgot to look at the picture xD thanks for the reply :) lol if i draw another one ill post it to see if i've improved any
It looks good, just the head is a bit unproportional, the neck is a little too long, and maybe make the shoulder a bit wider/larger? good job though!
When you are stuck on what is wrong with a drawing I have had my art professors tell me to look at the work upside down in a mirror. This detaches you from your drawing a bit (if you have ever drawn something and thought it was fantastic and then come back to look at it a couple months later and went yuck! then you know what I mean by being detached) and a different view sometimes lets you see what you couldn't before.
lol i think i might do that thanks for ur replys :) ill post a new drawing soon to see if u guys think i got any better
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