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Fly 01-13-2011 04:28 PM

Poem; Mended
 
I'm horrified to do this, horrified. Its a long story that explains the poem so I wont post it unless asked.
M E N D E D
We bought you for love,
But we never knew of,
Gods plan for you,
That tore us apart,
But we came together at the end,
And were able to mend,
That tear(tare, sp?),
But now your leaving,
I’ll still keep believing,
That we were meant to be,
Mended back into you and me.
I LOVE YOU STAR
edited, : where/were. CRITIQUE PLZ

Fly 01-19-2011 03:45 PM

anyone? please critique!

I love horses 02-01-2011 11:42 AM

Nice poem. (:


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