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lildonkey8 05-28-2011 12:25 AM

Halp! I'm Stuck!
 
So,
Someone on my island said she'd publish me a book if I'd like. I'm working on writing it but don't know where to go from now.
Here is a summary of what I have so far:
I sit out and watch the foals and adults as they romp and play.
And now I'm at:
I go to my mum to ask to get a halter....

What now? What should the character do?

AlexS 05-28-2011 02:45 AM

Your mum cannot find the halter? You have to find a way of getting the horses to come to you without one?

Maybe you can't do that for a few days and you build a bond in that time which allows the horses to trust you and come to you?

lildonkey8 05-28-2011 02:13 PM

I like that, Thanks!

Phantomstallion 05-30-2011 04:46 PM

You could be like sad because you need to catch a horse/foal to sell after your mum gives you the halter.


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