The pencil drawing is lovely! It will make good reproductions. Get it scanned with high resolution, sell 9 x12 size ready to frame prints for $25 each, at least.
When we work stylized, we can take some liberties with how the legs are moving, but things work best if the footfall is within the parameters of a true trot or canter. It isn't a big deal when the overall feeling is as elegant and gorgeous as you have there. Just something to think on when you sketch it out.
Last edited by tinyliny; 02-07-2020 at 12:38 AM.