Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: British Columbia
We could go over all her grammar all day long, and it will never be perfect. Personally, I still think what you posted sounds awkward as heck (too many fragments and awkward full stops), she used some of what I offered, which was better than she had.
To the op:
Personally, I think it's GREAT that you want to start your own business, but from what I've seen I do believe you're putting yourself and other people's animals in dangerous situations, if you really are lacking ANY training. Before you consider this, perhaps try to get some training through working with others, or just watching...